Wednesday 20 June 2018

Our Oceans are a dumping ground

WALT:Think Critically, synthesize information, evaluate the reliability of what we are reading, convey our personal ideas and point of view.

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  2. HI my name is Florence and i am a year 7. I have just seen your google drawing about our oceans it is very interesting and i really enjoyed reading it. But next time you could try and add some photos and change the writing to make it look more engaging to read but other than that it was awesome and i really liked reading it
    Come and check out my blog:https://kpsflorencec.blogspot.com have a nice day:)

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  3. Hi Erika my name is Jacquelyn and I am a year 7 at Kawakawa Primary School. I really like how you have separated your facts into little boxes. Maybe next time you can do a little skit about the dumps and then you could also have you guys solving the problem. If you want to visit my blog than go to https://kpsjacquelym.blogspot.com/.Talk again soon :)

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  4. Kia ora Erika my name is Carney i go to Kawakawa Primary School. Your blog post was very thoughtful and interesting. I really enjoyed reading your blog post about how the earth was a dumping ground. In our class we have also been learning about littering and pollution. I really thought the colour you chose for your background was very eye catching that made your text really stand out. Your blog post was very mindful and i really hope to see more like this. You did an excellent job on this presentation. Feel free to come check out my blog at
    :http://kpscarneyk.blogspot.com/

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